What are two editorials that you would like to write? Explain your two ideas clearly! Please be sure to write your name with your entry.
Sunday, October 30, 2011
Blog Question Homework - Due by Midnight on November 6th
Every two weeks, students are required to write an editorial. These writing assignments are usually created by Mrs. Birnkrant and help students practice a variety of skills including problem solving, sequencing, exploring cause and effect, comparing and contrasting, and more.
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one editorial i would like to write is about cleaning our envirement and the other is about if we had an oppertunity to change the government what would we change. cleaning our envirement beceause its important for our country to be clean or else our country is nothing but trash now. and what would we change in the goevernment if we had an oppurtunity,because the government in the us is getting over reacted a little bit and give a chance for us to rearrange it and put in better details.
one editorial that i awould like to write is,how is candy good and not good?the second one is,do you think thanksgiving is a religious holiday and why?BY!FATUMAHASSAN
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I would like to write an editorial about the differences between school in the United States and school in other countries like Haiti. I would also like to write about what I would like to be in the future.
Linda
One topic i would like to write about is how to solve the problem of gang violence such as gang related fights. My second topic would be to tell who your best friend is and what are some of the conflicts that come about.
~LaNaya Willis
Two editorials that I would like to write are first, one about how the state is including E.S.L student's grades on the New York State test's, and using them in the school's average. This is not fair because many kids have just came from different countries and don't know much English, so it is not fair that they have to take the same test's as kids that have been in America all their lives!! Also, I would like to write an editorial on helping the environment. This is because the environment is in need of help because there is so much pollution in the world and we need to start changing our ways and helping save our planet.
One editorial I would like to write about is about bullying in school.I would write about bullying because many children get bullied in school everyday.I would also write an editorial comparing the city I was born and raised in with Syracuse.I would compare my hometown and syracuse because they have many differences.BY BONKE Rugiration.
One editorial that like to right is about our life story because people talk about others and don't know their life story.Another editoral that I would like to write is about our favorite fruits. I would like to write this story because people can know what others like, and make a bar graph to se how many students like this fruit, and to see how many students like that fruit. ~by nyla robinson.
One editorial i would like to write about is about school renovation. I would like to write about school renovation because they always say that our school is getting renovated , but never does. Another editorial i would like to write about is why we should start fundraising for our 8th grade field trip now instead of later in the year. i would like to write an editorial about this because last year the former 8th graders started raising money late and they didn't go on the greatest 8th grade field trip.
- Kiana Ferguson 11.01.11
2nd Period
What is your favorite sport and why? Why do we get home work on fridays? Keamar Jackson
An editorial I would like to write about is Cyber Bulling. The second editorial would be How Are Schools Different?. I would want to write about Cyber Bulling because I want to know how kids,teens, and people can be bullied and more..And I would want to write about How schools are different because I want to know is it the students that make the school different or is it something else..
~ Mildalees Castro
I would like to write an editorial about what you would bring if you were to be trapped on an island. I would also like write about what games people like to play because my family and I are very competitive.
Tre'Zure J.
I would like to write an editorial about how our school will be renovated. I would also like to write about ways that we could help stop bullying.
Jasmine C.
One editorial i would like to learn about is why do the NBA got to waite 2 weeks before thay play but the NFL dont gota wait.. by'COREY BRYANT
One editorial that I would like to write about is the whether or not the school anouncments are necessary. I would write about it because most of the students and some teachers think that the school anouncments are unecessary. The other editorial I would like to write about is that why do we get homework on Fridays. This is the most stressful thing that I have to deal with on the weekends because the weekends are there so you can relax from school and we already get enough homework as it is.
Richie Llanos
One Editorial I would to write is about bullying because when many kids come from other country, kids just think that they can just make fun of them because they speak another language and they can't under stand what they saying.Also I would like to write about the 8th grade field trip because last year the former 8th grader's waited until the last minute to raise
money, so i think we should start NOW and get it all our shoulder so later on we have the money to choose where to go to.
-Falastin Abukar 11.03.11
One editorial i would like to write about is how to stop bullying and how can you help stop bullies when they are bullying somebody.The other editorial i would like to write about is how can we help the environment.I want write about these editorial because they are really important and bullying is one of the big problem in school and recycling is one of the big problem in US and there are many environmental problem in United State.......
BY:FAIZAN HASEEB
One editorial I would like to write is what you would do if you won a million dollars. I would like to write about this because people always ask the question "What would you do if you won the lottery?" so I think that would be interesting to write about. Another editorial I would like to write is if you think they need to announce anouncements and why they have so many announments. I think this would be a good editorial because I think that the amount of annoucements the office makes is disrupting our classes.
~Sierra DeAngelo 11.3.11 Period 3
one editorial i would like to write about is if you could go anywhere around the world where would you go because some country or state is different then others. some people talk about other country but they don't even know what they do or how they live. another editorial i would write about is if u could be famous what would u be because some people are remembered for what they did to make the earth a better place. people also get remembered as their hero and people will make statue to remember them and show loyalty to them. YOUR STUDENT Mukoma Mukoma
One editorial I would like to write about is bullying.I would do an editarial on bullying because many people are getting bullied in modern day soiciety.bullying causes people to become insane inorder to let the person fell the pain they are felling.Another editorial I would like to do is on gang violence.I would do an editorial on gang violence because half of the children in school are in gangs maybe even more.In if gangs are in school the other children in that school wouldn't be as safe.How well do you know a person.
Cason B. Wagner
one editorial i think we should do is that what is our favorite birthday party we had ever had and where did we spend it and how is it special to you:)
By: Dannielle
Name:Yasinkulmiya The editorial that I woude like to write is "what do you want to become in the future"? and why. and i want kids to think about what they want to become also the editorial i want to write is "if u see a homeless person what would u do to make him happy and also u are one of the most riches guy and also one of the homeless was your crush in highschool. also this can be fun to write for teen or an adolet .
One editorial I would like to write about is why older people/parents thinks that rap is the worst thing that happened since 9/11.Another editorial I want write is about acronyms,because many old people thinks that acronyms,tht we the "New Generation",uses is dumb,like LOL,IDK,and LMFAO etc.
Josh
A editorial I would like to write about is all the drug use in the city and how to stop it and i would like to write about bullying and ways to prevent it.
Leeban Shirwa
one editorial i would like to write about is about the affect on people from other countries coming to America or different ways on how to solve gang violence and drama . I would like to write about these two subjects because they interest me in many ways .
- chantelle
My first editorial i would write about is how bullying can affect people and what might happen when someone is bullied. My second editorial would be about how technology today is more advanced than technology back then.
-Johnny Duong
The two editorials that I would like to write about are cleaning our enviroment and why school is important.I would like to write about cleaning the enviroment because it would inform people about trashed up enviroments and it would gets lots of people to probably help clean the enviroment.I would like to write about why school is important because many students think school is not important.School gets many people to have successful lives.FAHIRA MASIC
if i had to pick two editorial 1 of them would be about favorute food because i love food and a nother editorial i would like to do is write a poem on love cuase i love love!
from Jimmeshia Ware :D Hi Ms.Short
one editorial i would like write about is kids being above the influence because kids these days are getting out of control and are starting to get in touble and killing other people. my second editorial cyber bullying because kids are killing themselves because they are being bully about miner things and personal things that should ot be share with other kids. :D
Kamara Felder
one editorial i would like would like to write is what is it like to be in a different place you live in then now. i want to write about that because everyone has different different experiences and i would like to know how every experiences it differently. another one i would like to write is that can doing bad things always be bad or can sometimes be good. i would like to write this one also because i can show people that doing bad things can be right it the situation is pushing for you to do it. Michael Manuel
Do students need education? This is an editorial that I would like to write because students need to understand why it is important to learn and get an education. If you really understand education you can do what you want, and have a better life. You will also be more wealthy with an education. The second editorial I would write would be How students can find a job easily? I would write this because maybe students dont know how to find a job or even where to begin looking for a job.
Lah Yoo Htoo.
One editorial I would like to write is Why Do We Have So Many Announcements? Nobody seems to agree with the announcements we have, except for the morning ones. All they do is annoy people and interrupt classes. Another editorial I would like to write is Why Is There A Lot Of Homework On Somedays And Very Little On Others? This is hard on students. Some days homework takes it forever and others there's not much at all. It should be balanced.
~ Xavier Boyer
One editorial I would like to write about is ways we could improve our school and make it a better place, so that kids would want to come to school all the time without it being question. I would also want to write an editorial about why do we only have four half days this school year. I would want to write about this because this affects many people lives in many ways.
- Kayla Turner <3
one editorial i would like to write about is what is the best thing in your life because there are lot of thing that might be the best to you but not to other.another thing i want to write about is do u think your better than other because there are so many people who think they are the best and can do anything they want and say anything to other people. december aung
An editorial that i would enjoy writing would be an editorial about how going to H.W. Smith is a great experience for children. I think this would be an interesting editorial to write about because, H.W. Smith is not like other schools. Its a combination of all different races and religions . Its a great learning experience. Going to H.W. Smith school , helps you socially & educationally. It helps you to treat others as equals & not discriminate because of weight, religion, race, physical features, etc. I think it would be great to spread the amazing learning experiences that H.W. Smith has to offer so others can recognize and appreciate what they are trying to do for society.
Marissa Barnett .
(sorry its late, i totally forgot!)
An editorial I would like to write about is how can schools improve? Can lunch be better and have more of variety of different foods and snacks? How can the teachers improve in school? Does their teaching need to be thought a different way? Can the environment of the schools improve? This is a important subject since the health and student academical achievements should improve further.
Another idea for an editorial can be about what opportunities we would like as a student? Could we have more advance classes? Should there be more sport activities to enroll for. This should be important to students because if you are talented in (a) certain sport(s) you can get a scholarship for college and may change their future into a brighter road. These are just two ideas of what our editorial can be in the future.
~~~Joseph Garcia~~~
Out of a collection of ideas regarding the subject of the editorials given, a select two that I have are about the media's effects on society both negatively and positively. People, especially teenagers are exposed to thousands of images, messages, and expectations put out by the media daily. For a student to express their views either (or both) of these ideas, they would grasp an understanding the influence of some daily occurrences.
~Kathleen Willard
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